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Re: My Hair
lol cute. maybe i'll get dreadlocks now, naybe not. u kno. hey maybe i'll grow dreadlocks, never shower, and get pregnant. your poem has inspired me.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Purple
You know? Like dang I thought purple was the most wonderful color, and so did someone else, really special to me, and now we're at a bad place in our ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Purple
Purple, something beautiful turning into your worst nightmare.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Purple
The first time I saw you, I nearly cried, You're color was so sweet. You looked so innocent, You cared for me, Caressed my lonely curves. But then as all ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Your deadly embrace
*Gaping still* Wow you are a very talented little soul. Keep up stuff like this and you'll have publishers licking your shoes. I LOVED it. I wish I could give ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Irises of Crimson
Mhm. I feel this is how my ex feels about me right now. Very good! I will definetly save and remember this one.
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Under The Twilight
This was really really good. Even though the holding hands part was probably meant for lovers, it captured me in a different way. See, I own (ok my family) a ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Pictures of Victoria
Mhmmm she's very pretty. I LOVE the one she took. But also, sure she's just ur friend. Lol. Nice though. :D Luvs! -Ailam
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Sureal's Most Awesomly Random Sketches!
Oh my God! The one with the eye and the hand that's being held out, u know which one right?, is like awesome! It'll scare me a little though. Wellz, ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: An Ode to Me
Dude that was pretty awesome. It was all concieted and fascist and big headed but you totally made it all good at the end. I really like you for some ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Tiny Hands, Tiny Feet
I NEED SUGGESTIONS MAJORLY! TELL ME WHAT I DID WRONG AND HELP ME FIX THIS! I NEED TO GET IT PERFECT! Tiny Hands, Tiny Feet For Melissa and Ashton By ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Perfect Characters?
I totally understand the desire to write about perfect characters! It's like you want them to be YOU and by eliminating their flaws, yours are gone too and you can ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Boredom
Yeah this poem sucked. So how do you take stuff out of your portfolio cuz I HATE this poem and I want it gone.
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Whispers of the Fallen - Chapter One, Part 1
I just have to say to Joeducktape that the vomitting part was cool. And to Sureal, ur writing is so discriptive! I try so hard to be discriptive but it ...
Apr 20, 2008 -
Re: High School Students
dude no one can tell anyone that something is not a poem. u guys are crazy. if it was written to be a poem, it's a poem, no matter what.
Apr 19, 2008
